"It came as something of a shock . . . to discover that for over thirty years of writing my attention has turned again and again to the same unvarying gamut of sounds and images. I wish I hadn't noticed this. In fact, it became an embarrassment and I began to wonder if I should file A CATALOGUE OF PERSONAL OBSESSIONS. And my agent was once heard to moan aloud . . . "Oh God, Findley - not more rabbits!"
-introduction, Dinner Along The Amazon, Timothy Findley.
I could relate to the discovery of recurring themes, images, character traits, and worse - repeated phrasing I was finding in my stories (had I written this previous, or perhaps it was in a draft somewhere that never came to fruition.) I don't have thirty something years experience which makes it all the more worrisome. It got me thinking of other things that creep into my fiction over and over again.
Felines have a habit of wandering onto my pages, and yes, many of my human characters are named after cats that have passed.
Recently, I wrote the dialogue tag 'whispered loudly' and a bell sounded. I scoured previous stories to find it a couple of times and exclaimed, "My characters shall whisper loudly no more!"
I thought "the rolling waves of nausea" was rather clever when I first wrote it, but it resurfacing for a second time made me feel sick to my stomach.
Other recurring bits include bars and their regulars, basements and their stairs, meatloaf, and hockey.
". . . writers are never through with the world they see and hear . . . because it is a world inside their heads, which is the 'real' world they write about."
I suppose the familiar becomes a handle of sorts. There lies the honesty in fiction that is required to make it believable. Too many layers covering up truth kills a story.
June 1, 2012
May 29, 2012
May Literary Links
The Urban Muse. Email Or E-Mail? Online Or On-line? Are You Behind The Times?
the guardian. Do literary spoilers matter?
the Paris Review. Gay Talese, The Art of Nonfiction No. 2
Peevish Penman. The Nine Parts of Speech and the F-word
ragan.com. 20 tips to help you proofread like a pro
Grammarist. Coup de grace
Labels:
editing,
grammar,
literary links,
writing tips
May 13, 2012
Fable Experience
Months ago I was contacted by Robin D. Laws, Creative Director at Stone Skin Press. He asked if I would be interested in writing a fable for an anthology. Richard Scarsbrook had passed my name along.
My first thought was—fable,
what’s a fable? I knew there were animals in these tales and usually a lesson
of some kind. Off to the library I went to investigate.
Commonalities I found included talking animals, the
appearance of humans although rarely referred to by name (the boy, the farmer,
the vet), lots of dialogue (often the last line), descriptive verbs and adverbs,
the occasional God (Aphrodite, Zeus) as character, an omniscient pov, and an
amusing tone. The morals often related to a deadly sin with a single action
ending the story. Stories ran 100-400 words and their titles were often simple (The Neighbouring Frogs.)
A project brief explained the boundaries. The fable was to
be original, not a retelling of an existing one; word count to be 300-1500; the
tone a mix of “pedagogical seriousness with 2,500 year old whimsy”; and the
message could be expressed as a last line of dialogue or left implicit. I would
have two months to finish the fable. Surprisingly, I was very calm about having
a deadline, it helped me focus.
Robin had received a first wave of fables
and said he had enough featuring cats, mice, and fish, as well as stories in
which the main character gets eaten by a predator at the end. Of course cats
were to figure in my story, but that would have been too easy.
I wanted to choose animals I understood and my first
choice was racoons (my mum raised orphans), but I settled on rats (wonderful
pets) to be the main characters. I added an army of cockroaches as I
had unfortunately the experience of living with these. I sent Robin my synopsis: “Domesticated husband and wife rats share flat above sandwich shop
with band of cockroaches.”
I knew my story and thought the moral would clarify itself
as I went through—not
exactly. A friend suggested I choose the moral first and then write from there,
but I was already set on the storyline. I was
lucky enough to workshop “The Rats and the Cockroaches” with Richard Scarsbrook and Dan Perry (both in the anthology), and F&G Writers. It’s reassuring when the concerns you have are reflected in other’s
feedback. This happened again when I sent Robin my final script. He pointed out
something, which I thought I might be getting away with. A few more tweaks and zoop—out to the
universe.
Super excited to read the anthology. Keep
you posted.
April 30, 2012
April Literary Links
The Fiddlehead Blog. Rebels with a Cause: France’s 13e Note Editions
Open Book Toronto. On Writing: the Short Story Edition, with Mike Barnes
Artzicarol Ramblings. Style Sheets for Consistency
The Dirt Worker's Journal. Harry Crews
Urban Graffiti. Urban Graffiti Mix #6
99%. Op-Ed: Confidence vs Shyness
Writer's Relief. Lit Mag Spotlight: The Review Review
E.A. Hand. How to Write an Unimpressive Author Bio
The New York Times. Some Book: Celebrating 60 Years of 'Charlotte's Web'
Flavorwire. 10 Crazy and Unusual Book Designs
Open Book Toronto. On Writing: the Short Story Edition, with Mike Barnes
Artzicarol Ramblings. Style Sheets for Consistency
The Dirt Worker's Journal. Harry Crews
Urban Graffiti. Urban Graffiti Mix #6
99%. Op-Ed: Confidence vs Shyness
Writer's Relief. Lit Mag Spotlight: The Review Review
E.A. Hand. How to Write an Unimpressive Author Bio
The New York Times. Some Book: Celebrating 60 Years of 'Charlotte's Web'
Flavorwire. 10 Crazy and Unusual Book Designs
April 7, 2012
Life Before Writing
“I am distracted; I am weary to the bottom of my soul;
sorrow lies heavy on my heart; and yet I am expected to sit down and write! And
this is called ‘living!’” – Anton Chekhov, “Hush”
I didn’t write fiction much of my adult life. I was free, and I didn’t even know it. After my first creative writing class, I was hooked. I became obsessed, but I thought (as with many safe addictions)that it would peter out in six months. Had I known this wasn’t the case, I would have enjoyed my guilt-free existence a little more.
Writing is a disease—a
never ending dissatisfaction. Of course, there is joy when you discover the
perfect phrase, piece of dialogue, or when to kill a character for story’s
sake. And news of accepted work is great, but all these woohoos! are fleeting—one quickly turns back
to ideas and unfinished work. Whatever I’m doing, wherever I am, I think about
writing, that I should be writing—more.
Writers share that moment when they knew their destiny. They
mention the first zine they stapled together in grade two or the poem they
carved into a desk in junior high.I didn’t write fiction much of my adult life. I was free, and I didn’t even know it. After my first creative writing class, I was hooked. I became obsessed, but I thought (as with many safe addictions)that it would peter out in six months. Had I known this wasn’t the case, I would have enjoyed my guilt-free existence a little more.
“Being a writer is like having homework every night for the
rest of your life.” – Lawrence Kasdan
What if I quit right now? Writing keeps me out of trouble
(for the most part). The disease is spreading. I study editing now so I can
link my day job to my writing.
March 30, 2012
March Literary Links
apartment therapy. Literary Style: 15 Writers' Bedrooms
the Paris Review. On Tour with the Magnetic Fields: Part 1
The Mammalian Daily. Literary mag sets up shop, tells Animals not to submit work
Open Book Toronto. Rejection "Dear (insert name) - Please Only Send Your Best!"
Writer's Digest. How to find, rather than make, writing time
rogerebert.com. Mickey Rourke plays a tough bar fly
Taki's Magazine. "Like" or Dislike
Ottawa Magazine. Q&A: Sex-obsessed men, what Matthew Firth won’t tell Mom, and how a Spiderman action figure became a sex toy
Scientific American. The Inspiration Paradox: Your Best Creative Time Is Not When You Think
Advice to Writers. Interview: Andy Ihnatko
the Paris Review. On Tour with the Magnetic Fields: Part 1
The Mammalian Daily. Literary mag sets up shop, tells Animals not to submit work
Open Book Toronto. Rejection "Dear (insert name) - Please Only Send Your Best!"
Writer's Digest. How to find, rather than make, writing time
rogerebert.com. Mickey Rourke plays a tough bar fly
Taki's Magazine. "Like" or Dislike
Ottawa Magazine. Q&A: Sex-obsessed men, what Matthew Firth won’t tell Mom, and how a Spiderman action figure became a sex toy
Scientific American. The Inspiration Paradox: Your Best Creative Time Is Not When You Think
Advice to Writers. Interview: Andy Ihnatko
March 26, 2012
Dragnet Publications
Dragnet Magazine, an online publicatation, will feature my short story "The Promise of Puppies" in its next issue. Fellow F&G writer, Nadia Ragbar will also have two fictions, "The Fair" and "Wolves Using the Patio Furniture" appear in the same issue.
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